The Passage
By: Justin Cronin

Poor Little Amy...
I just don’t think The Passage and I were meant to be.
It seemed like things would work out between us – I had heard some good things about it; I put the e-book on hold at the library and conveniently, it was ready to go just in time for two back-to-back work trips, including a trip overseas (i.e. lots of reading time on the plane and at the airport); it’s a thick one (about 800 pages), so I figured I would have plenty of time to dig into it. However, things quickly went downhill. I get on the plane, we get up to cruising altitude, and I whip out the ole e-Reader and the battery is dead. Great. Now what am I going to for the next six hours? Strike one – although I’ll admit that’s more my fault than the book’s fault, but not a great start to what I thought was a promising relationship.
I get to my destination, charge up the e-Reader and start reading. I’m working long days while I’m gone, so I’m only able to get through about 15-20 pages a night before falling asleep. I gotta be honest, those 20 pages aren’t hooking me. I’m interested, but I’m not dying to pick it up the next night. Strike two – 800 page books should not make me work for it right off the bat. Relationships should be easy in the beginning.
I keep trudging through and as I’m going along, there are pieces that are good, especially in the first couple hundred pages. Then the story just starts crawling and I stop wondering why the book is 800 pages long: this guy doesn’t know how to shut up. There are chunks of the book that didn’t stick with me – just blank little spaces in the story where I don’t really remember what happened. Not a good thing. Strike three – get an editor to tighten this story up.
Despite this, I stick with it, assuming there has to be some kind of amazing conclusion. I’ve heard good things about the book, I can see how the author is starting to bring the different characters and stories back together, the premise is interesting, I am engaged with some of the characters. And then… pfffft. The ending falls a little flat. And then I find out The Passage is just the first book in a trilogy! The first book is the one that supposed to hook you in a trilogy! It’s the second one that’s supposed to be a little dull because it’s the bridge of the story. An 800 page opening salvo in a trilogy that’s not captivating? Strike four. You’re out.
Side note: Baseball rules don’t always translate to the lit world – you’re allowed to have four strikes here. Like “no crying in baseball”? Crying is definitely allowed while reading.
For those of you who want to know what the book is actually about, here’s a quick note on premise: the US military tries to turn convicts into human weapons by infecting them with a vampire virus from the Amazon and then, oops, they get loose and start killing and infecting the entire country. Small pockets of humans are able to survive and protect themselves from “the virals” but are totally cut off from the rest of the world. Roaming around in the midst of it all, there’s a twelve-year-old girl, Amy, who was infected with the virus as well, but she seems to get the benefits of the virus (long-life, doesn’t need to eat or sleep, speed and agility, some kind of telepathy) without the need to feed on humans. She can survive on her own and seems to be able to communicate with the virals. Not fully human and not fully viral, it’s clear she has some role in potentially saving the world, but it’s not clear if she’s even aware of it or how it will play out.
Overall, sounds like a nice mix of apocalyptic literature, sci-fi, and human melodrama. I’m not going to deny that The Passage had potential, but it just made me work too hard for it. Unless I hear rave reviews about the next book in the trilogy, I’m not planning to pick it up.
In a nutshell: Four strikes = I don’t really recommend it. Two stars.